I have finally made a story I'm pretty happy with now!
Before this final story I had came up with a few others which weren't good enough.
But here's the script a story beforehand
Tetra talking about how she can climb to the top of the redwood and how she will show him.
they pass chris and he starts yelling at em,
Chris: hey you still pretending to be going out? everyone knows you're gonna come out that huge closet together? I mean it's probably close to bursting with all those basketballs (gestures to tetra) and bowties or whatever crap you wear.(points at coats)
Tetra : Ugghh, is that all you got? Cause I bet you're gonna regret it when we turn out way smarter than you and end up being your bosses!
-Coats already starting to walk away-
Chris: eh, maybe Coats, I've heard how he talks, like a fenchy puff pastry. But look at him he's running away!
Tetra: ughh unhg!? oh!
-she runs over to coats-
Tetra: Come on he was on his own! we could have totally won there!
Coats: I don't think anyone was gonna win there, y-you know people like that. stuck in a mindset and won't budge.
Tetra: can at least TRY to change him, like, I'm sick of this! every time we walk past him.
Coats: -hold his head- just gotta try to avoid him, can kinda see that mess of hair from a distance.
Tetra: yeah, hey! how bout i show you my tree skillz!
-Cut to a park tetra in a tree-
-Coats looking at a girl(Bex) making flirty gestures-
Tetra: ey hey you looking? -is behind coats and he's not looking, Tetra is off screen-
ARE YOU LOOKING!?
-Coats is startled by tetra's yelling-
Coats: ugh UGH YEAH!!
Tetra: Look I got to the top! And you promised me if i could you'd try to climb!
coats:...ah sugar lumps i did...ugh.
-He looks at the tree worried and jumps for a branch, won't let go.-
Tetra: Aww das not even trying!
-shot cuts to coats handing, tetra jumps down-
Tetra: Want me to push you up
Coats: N-no NO I'M FINE! I'll just...stay here.
Tetra: You are about 1 foot from the ground c'mon you can totes let go!
Coats: Have you seen my legs! they can't take a drop as big as that!!
-Tetra Sighs, puts her arms round coats- ok let go...
-coats does so and she puts him down-
-Coats Is on the ground and hugs tetra-
Coats: No more tree's!!
-ends up on his knees hugging her legs-
Tetra:..Uuhhhh...we can go to the suit shop...like..if that's better?
-Coats Does a camp tee-hee giddy thing-
Coats: Eeee! really! YOU wanna go for once?
Tetra: Aahh uhh suure.
-It cuts to inside a suit shop coats looking at a full 3 piece suit-
Coats: One day...ONE DAY I will have you!
Tetra: pppfttt yeah like in 30 years!
-hanging off a clothing poll or sat on top of a high shelf, is yelled at to get off-
Coats: Stop that man! we're gonna get thrown outta here! But uhh, hey are there any suits here you'd wear?
Tetra: Ey are there any suits that you can like run around in?
Coats: N-no no! You don't do that to poor suits! Think of the silk ascots and ties! think of the velour!
Tetra: But think of ME running round the court with a tie around my head, being a friggen cool kid!
Coats:...tha..that's not cool :c mother you ruin everything!! wwaahh waahhh!!
-fake sobs near the door-
Tetra: It's okay son, mother will never run in a suit, so long as you never get stuck in a tree again.
-They leave the store and end up passing Chris's house, Coats freaks out but Tetra wants to tell Chris off for his behavior before. Chris' sis Bex is there this time, as Tetra comes into there garden yelling Bex questions why, Tetra claims Chris is a bully-
Bex: So you think Chris is a bully?
Tetra: Well YEAH all he does is give us a hard time! Your whole house is just weird!
Bex: uh? So...ugh what am i then? If Chris is a bully what label you gonna give me then?
Tetra: Well..i dunno, ain't you a slut or something? I heard guys talking about you.
Bex: So, I like sex huh, woah how awful of me.
Tetra: Well that's not awful but I mean Chris he-
-Shows coats talking to Chris, Chris head in hands-
Tetra: What the!? Why he, Coats?
Bex: Chris is gay tetra...And our mam doesn't like it. Pretty silly isn't it.
Tetra: wWell how were we suppose to know!
Bex: And how is Chris suppose to know you from first glance? What do you think he labels you coats as.
Tetra: He labels him as gay, even though it's a lie.
Bex; maybe Chris thinks Coats was the same as him, to afraid to speak up. If you met Coats for the first time What would YOU label him as.
Tetra: eh I i can't put a label on him! He's...he's got to much going awn!
Bex: exactly...
And the plan i had before the finalized story, I had a longer version where Chris ended up finding them in a clothes store. same story just dragged out.
I wanted to show Tetra and Coats in both of there preferred environments.
Very rough sketches on paper.